This was a spontaneous chapter. Might be overly dramatic or grammatically horrid. If it doesn't suit you taste, feel free to give me a critic and I'll try to re-edit it the best i can.
I plan to add a chapter weekly or every bi-weekly. Look forward to it! All support and encouragements are always highly valued! XD
btw, i was wondering whether or not i should re-do the plot of the first chapter. I mean... his mother's death due to his birth seems tragic and a bit hard to build a plot on... maybe I should give a different scenario resulting in his mother's death? what do you think?
-cheers!
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